Overall the feedback on my improvements was very good however, during the time in which I removed some clips to stop 1:40 looking like a montage I accidentally left a few blank gaps and therefore had black jump cuts.
Also my teacher said that the record label at the end needed to have a slower reveal and to be on screen for longer.
Here is my improvements;
http://youtu.be/juj4Dh5PT8E
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