The feedback I got from my first drafting of my music video, my teacher stated that I needed to improve on the following;
1. The lips needed to be brighter and better contrasted as she too felt they were not bold enough.
2. Around 1:40 there was a section that looked too much like a montage and therefore needed work done - additionally I realised that the timing of this section was off and needed to be refined.
3. Add in some form of text at the ending of the video, eg: artist title or the record label.
Since receiving the feedback I have worked on these factors and fixed any problems noted. Here is the result of this;
http://youtu.be/UO75h5Lkfvg
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